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Cryus- Chernobyl Curs OCT by Mogria Cryus- Chernobyl Curs OCT by Mogria
I'm sorry I just have to write this:
His name is Cryus not Cyrus
His name is Cryus not Cyrus
His name is Cryus not Cyrus

This is my audition for :iconchernobyl-curs:

Name: Cryus

Breed Base: Mutt (Carolina Dog and American Pit Bull Terrier)
Age: 3 1/2

Gender: Male

Height/Weight: 24 inches/ 75 lbs

Abilities: none

Strengths:
>He has a strong jaw which can easily break bones.
>He's quick on his feet.
>Has very good hearing as he is half blind.
> High tolerance of pain.

Weaknesses:
>He can't see anything coming at him from the right side as he is competly blind in that eye.
> He has insomnia so is often tired.
>The three gashes on his right arm are very deep. They heal poorly. A good bite to his arm and reopen the wound. This is a weak spot that causes his leg to be useless as he no longer can put weight on it.
>Because his hearing is so good loud noises are amplified and can cause him great pain.

Personality: Uncaring and short tempered. Cryus would much rather be by himself, he's rather unsociable.

History: Born and raise as a fighting dog. The scars he as are from past fights. After more then two years of fighting he grew sick of it and managed to escape.
But a year later Cryus has come to find out fighting is all he knows. He becomes twitchy if he dosen't fight for long periods of time. To him fighting is like a drug, he feels good after a fight (this is the rare times when you can see him smile). That said, he know the difference between fighting and killing.

Likes: Fighting, being alone, walking at night when he can't sleep.

Dislikes: Fighting, Crowed places, loud/annoying dogs, his insomnia/nightmares.

Other:
>Being an ex-fighter dog he has knowledge in fighting.
>His insomnia is mostly dew to his nightmares.
> His nightmares are mostly twisted memories of his times as a fighting dog.
>If Cryus had theme songs these would be them xD --->
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:iconzappyattack:
ZappyAttack Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2011  Student General Artist
Got to be one of my favorites. :3
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:iconmogria:
Mogria Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2011  Student General Artist
Aw yeah~! xD
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:iconagentdarkhorse:
AgentDarkhorse Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cryus is pretty awesome! He will have to pop up in Jig's story
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:iconmogria:
Mogria Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011  Student General Artist
Lol, thanks xD
They look like they
would be pretty good bros xD
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:iconagentdarkhorse:
AgentDarkhorse Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh yes, I can wait till they meet
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:iconsongdog-strayfang:
Songdog-StrayFang Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome to the tournament!
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:iconmogria:
Mogria Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you so much :D
I hope to do well, but that seems
really hard as their are so many
great artists involved xD
btw, I love your avatar~
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:iconsongdog-strayfang:
Songdog-StrayFang Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sure you'll do fine as long as you complete your audition in time. Best of luck, and thank you!
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:iconmogria:
Mogria Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2011  Student General Artist
Thanks~
You too :D
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:iconshinkoryu14:
Shinkoryu14 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Alright, here's our review.

First of all Cyrus is too tall. A Carolina dog ranges between 17-24 inches in height, and a pit bull between 14-24 inches. Ideally he should be in the height range for the breeds you mentioned, not well above it.

Also, his strengths and weaknesses are imbalanced. Bad temper is a personality trait, not a weakness. This means he has four strengths and two weaknesses, so he needs at least two more weaknesses to balance out.
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:iconmogria:
Mogria Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you for taking time to view my application
and for reviewing it. I have changed his height and
have added two new weaknesses. I hope everything is
in order now. If their is anything else I need to
change please let me know.
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:iconshinkoryu14:
Shinkoryu14 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Alright, looks good. We'll invite your reference to the group, and we look forward to your audition.

For future reference, images save in better color quality if you save as .PNG rather than .JPEG. Just a tip.
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:iconmogria:
Mogria Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you so much for your time.
I should have the first page up shortly.

As a side note though, I did save it as a JPEG.
Maybe I just need to put up the quality?
(I use GIMP btw)
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:iconshinkoryu14:
Shinkoryu14 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
No worries, we look forward to it.

And I can tell you saved it as a JPEG, I'm saying the quality would be better if you saved as PNG instead. ^^;
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:iconmogria:
Mogria Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2011  Student General Artist
Oh! I'm sorry for the misunderstanding! >///<
Um, thank you for the suggestion. I'll
definitely use that in the future.
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